Very romantic! The mood really suited the track. Liked the use of dissolves. You could have perhaps increased the cutting rate at points to add variety, but thought it was entertaining.
Not enough performance - all narrative for last 2 thirds.Narrative events unclear in places - lost track of who was with who.Locations were a bit weak - clearly just the student's house.Lip sync'ing weak in places.Guitar playing not synchronised - and was there even a guitar solo?Good luck!Y13 studentsCastle School, Thornbury
Very romantic! The mood really suited the track. Liked the use of dissolves. You could have perhaps increased the cutting rate at points to add variety, but thought it was entertaining.
ReplyDeleteNot enough performance - all narrative for last 2 thirds.
ReplyDeleteNarrative events unclear in places - lost track of who was with who.
Locations were a bit weak - clearly just the student's house.
Lip sync'ing weak in places.
Guitar playing not synchronised - and was there even a guitar solo?
Good luck!
Y13 students
Castle School, Thornbury